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WIP - YinYi by ~lilsuika:iconlilsuika:


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Submitted: November 8, 2006
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Don't want to work on this anymore, I consider it mostly finished but not quite. >_<
Any pointers/suggestions would be most greatly appreciated.

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~tomoe2005:icontomoe2005: Nov 9, 2006, 12:10:48 AM
Oh its pretty. I guess the only thing I would suggest is to unflatten some of the color, add a little shading, but otherwise it's is lovely :D

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~SpriteOcarina:iconSpriteOcarina: Nov 9, 2006, 12:49:21 AM
Personally, I think the picture looks pretty good as it is. THe flats give it a soft, warm look. As for pointers, the ears appear to be located a bit too high, and I feel like the arms could be a bit longer.

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~lilsuika:iconlilsuika: Nov 9, 2006, 1:37:56 AM
I never noticed that the ears were a bit off, will definately see if I can fix it asap. Thanks for the pointers!
~lilsuika:iconlilsuika: Nov 9, 2006, 1:39:55 AM
I had started shading it somewhat, but at the same time was kind of partial to flats. Well let's see if I can get some motivation to work on a completely shaded version. Thanks!
~tomoe2005:icontomoe2005: Nov 9, 2006, 2:06:12 AM
I agree I like the flats, it gives it a very soft muted feel, maybe with just some subtle shading to make certain parts stand out a little bit?

I will send you good motivation vibes!! :heart:

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~Shipuh:iconShipuh: Nov 9, 2006, 6:04:36 AM
i like the flat colors. i just might add a subtle pattern layed in on the walls in the background.

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~antie:iconantie: Nov 9, 2006, 7:15:55 AM
Great as usual! :D

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~Nubia06:iconNubia06: Nov 9, 2006, 8:25:44 AM
You could add alittle shading but I like this. The flatness makes it look like an old wood block print.

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~TAngelCinnamon:iconTAngelCinnamon: Nov 9, 2006, 10:28:06 AM
I love her face shape in this image. . .Also the way you colored it. The image looks both finished and unfinished at the same time. . .and the way you fade out the lighting in the hair. . .genius! XD

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